I liked this piece a lot too. Although I wish that it was longer, I think that it's length allows for some extra analysis due to ambiguity.

I like the fact that it is short. it makes you think for yourself

Yeah, the length can lead to more thought and reflection on how to work with the ideas brought out through the story.

i also like it, but wanted it to be longer too. I was like waiting for more to come.

maybe its a metaphor for the world de-evolving or a least a deconstruction of the natural world as defined by humans

eve is abandoning adams structure

i agree i think it being shorter just lets it put it more in the readers hands to analyze-