no julia! you are definitely improving. be more optimistic about it.

pshh. if you read your old essays youll probably notice a big difference. writing just takes awhile to really change... o.o

Dude, Julia. We gotta fix this cognitive notion of yours that this will always stay the same. a) You don't write horrible essays and b.) You

can and so WILL totally bring it up. Plus, and this may be a mootish point, but hello, Lowell's academic rigor? Dude, I bet you're fine.

And the fact that you're so motivated anyways totally pwns the grade.

thanks =D

she says that i write too complicated. i have to simplify a lot of things