I think it looks good

You ticked all the boxes on what they want. I'll have another look when you've finished your sample but Jesse's not a character you can TLDR forever about

You've hit all the key components of the app and his personality and that's all you can do

awesomesauce

I'll do the other sample at some point today and then reserves open tomorrow right?

Yep!

Hell yeah I have one Jesse app completed and ready to submit. I think anyway