YOU CAN DO IT!

Thank you very much!

I've read the first chapter of 'The Price of Revolution', but

I'll give you my feedback when I finish the sample you put up, if that's alright with you?

Totally!

But based on the first chapter, shall I keep you on my list of people who want to read the whole thing for feedback?

JUST IN CASE. I NEED TO ASK.

YES, PLEASE.

Awesome~

But yes. If you even want to wait until you've got the whole thing to give feedback, that's fine! I just figured a sample would be good so that if it wasn't to taste, etc, WE WOULD KNOW EARLY ON.

At the moment, what I have to say is that I like your particular narrative style; the first few paragraphs have drawn me to want more.

It's more engaging than I expected, because you paint a vivid image with your choice of words.

Oh! Yay!