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the shading makes him look a little odd.

in the face.

specifically mouth and chin.

yeah thats because i fucked up the lips

it looked a little better when you hadnt shaded it. THe thing thats bothering me most is his egoraptor chin

I think the lips are basically the thing that needs to be touched up.

you got his nose perf tho.

justin - he has a bit of an egoraptor chin in the pic tho

but i mean, this is gonna end up being postcard sized. so i'm re-doing the chin now but do you think the lips will be that noticable if smaller?

they're really hard to do in ink.

Right, I just saw what was bothering me so much now. His chin region is too thin.

you mean large?

better better?

No, if you compare the 2 pics, his chin is wider real DT

i dont think so

it's larget in my illustration. but anyway, is it fixed-ish?

I'm definitely seeing 10nt now.

And I think the lips will still be noticeable if they're a little thinner. Not too much, just a bit.

ohhhhh trueee

hmmm i think just the top lip could be a bit thinner and the i feel like the nose is more hooked