Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:18:57.000Z
Halp
latest #26
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:19:15.000Z
I really want some more subtle ideas for Ocelot-sneakiness in my fic.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:19:37.000Z
But I'm having trouble getting my brain to work that way since I'm a pretty straight forward person =|
Colorless Juice
2013-04-11T23:19:42.000Z
what kind of sneakiness?
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Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:20:34.000Z
Well for a good portion of the story I know he just... ticks over, doesn't have much to worry about from that point of view, so I don't need much for that, it's when he gets triggered that Sunny has a problem
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:20:36.000Z
on her hands.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:21:12.000Z
He finds out that Big Boss's memories were used to build and AI waaaay before his were, this was kept a secret from him, and he plans to recover the (hopefully) dead AI.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:21:51.000Z
But I don't really know how to handle his getting Sunny to take him to Big Boss, she'd never do it knowing his plans, because she's twigged that BB is the main issue, bring him into the scene and Ocelot goes
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:21:53.000Z
into melt down.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:23:03.000Z
So he has to lie, but while I have a number of general ideas.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:22:15.000Z
The details are evasive.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:22:31.000Z
And my normal brainstorming partner has gone utterly AWOL ;_;
Colorless Juice
2013-04-11T23:22:34.000Z
hmm...
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:23:29.000Z
I mean she takes him nominally because BB is /dead/ the machine is gone, defunct, a dead parrot. But she's still not happy about it. So he nudges her in the right direction before outright getting her to take
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:23:31.000Z
him there.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:24:57.000Z
But... how =_=; why were they even in the area? Presumably they were deployed for some kind of skirmish, or defence... it wouldn't be a training exercise.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:24:14.000Z
Guh I knew I was going to get stuck with this
Colorless Juice
2013-04-11T23:24:32.000Z
playing up the "it's for the good of whatever" angle..? I haven't read this yet so I dunno
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:25:51.000Z
I think he /might/ be able to persuade her that there is something wrong. His programming forces him to protect her (within certain boundaries) so if she thought it was an extension of that he might get her
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:25:57.000Z
away from the others and closer to BB.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:26:00.000Z
Yyeess I like this.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:26:29.000Z
It would also be the only time he's used the 'protection' thing against her, instead of as a reason to trust him, so she's not likely to question it.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:28:25.000Z
Unfortunately BB is kind of hard to hide, and if she wanted she could take full control and get him out of there again, so I'd need to play on her sympathies to get her to hand over full control...
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:28:42.000Z
But Sunny's not stupid =| so I'm going to have to go all out on this.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:29:14.000Z
Snake is her weak point, that is one of the things that made her sympathetic in the first place, knowing Otacon's feelings, and her own, and understanding Ocelot's position.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:30:15.000Z
But it won't be enough for this.
Shalashaska
2013-04-11T23:30:17.000Z
sigH
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