they just met the Green Mor

and DAIM WOKE UP

and oh my god, i don't know whether to cry or laugh, cause Sira is SO RELIEVED and just OH MY GOD

JOOOEY YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED THIS POST, I FORGET OTHER PEOPLE DON'T JUST HAVE JOEY AND THEMSELVES ON THEIR PLURK BOARD THING

SAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIMMMMM

NOW KISS

I WANTED TO, BUT THEN I WASN'T SURE, LET ME SHOW YOU THE BITS

it ends abruptly

just a heads up, cause its WIP

62 days

WIP???

work in progress, love

RIIIIIIGHT

sorry, i read too much fic i'm too used to silly acronyms

it's so LONG

err, is that a problem? it's the 2000 or so words i wrote today

NO I LOVE IT LOL

they finally meet the Green Mor, i tried to really set the scene

oh good! haha

i'm just used to feedback from my class, where it's like 'okay this is good, but do this instead' - and i haven't been using enough setting

cues / description, so i tried to really push myself here

but i'll let you read in peace

Lord Kirin is so fucking PRETTY

yay

not sure what his proper 'title' should be, -shrugs-

did i describe him well? i didn't want to go overboard

also that saim song is on my writing playlist, and it comes on and i can't write cause SAIM FEELS - but its good cause it reminds me of what

it's all about :3

YES HE WAS DESCRIBED VERY WELL

YAAAY~

OMG LADY STARCHANGER IS SO PRETTY

do you like her? she's very different from Wavesong

also i might change their names - my class pointed out that Wavesong is the name of another dragon in another series

NO BUT WAVESONG IS SO PERFECT

SONGWAVE

THERE

OMG

How BIG is Lady Starchanger??? I didn't manage to grasp it. Like... Yeah

I thought she was huge but then hands...

and like I didn't really get the split cake part

then wrapped his arms around the other man and buried his face in Daim’s neck.

I AM UNABLE TO CAN

hahaha, i was a bit tired and i thought my analogies might be a bit off - i'll fix it up

Daim let out a startled breath,

she has hands big enough to hold Daim's body in them, so she's pretty big

I KNOW RIGHT

Sira didn’t even realise he’d started crying until Daim pulled away slightly, “Hey, what’s going on? Are you okay?”

I GOT ALL TEARY

DAIM IS SO CONFUSED

“I thought I’d lost you,”

Daim ran his hands down Sira’s back, “It’s okay, I’m right here,”

in tact. I'm quite sure you meant intact

He gently extricated himself from Sira’s grasp NO BB NO HOLD HIM 5EVA

yup, sure did

HAHAHA

HE HELD SIRA'S HAND

(PTERODACTYL NOISES*

hahhaahahahah~ i love sending you my stuff~ it makes me so happy

(MORE PTERODACTYL NOISES)

WEDDINGGGGGGG

hahahahaha

i could see them getting married in Starchanger's grove -nod nod- it's pretty beautiful there

also i need another name for her, and Wavesong, do you like Smalltalon? maybe i'll change all their names... should i call them -colour' Mor

i was wondering if i should think of a better term for that too...

-ponder ponder-

also, big question, should i change to a more active narrator's voice? or maybe even change to first person? i just don't know...

a. omg in the garden goiejrkgkldjf

b. NNNNNNOOOOOO don't change their namesssss

c. I like how you're writing it now

hmmmm, i don't know if i could tell it better another way - i might give it a go... but maybe after i've finished the first draft

and i don't like Starchanger, Wavesong reminded me class of another thing which took them out of reading it, and it depends what i change

them to if Smalltalon stays or not

-shrugs- i'm not precious about these things Joey, you can't afford to be as a creator

if something's not working, for you or your reader, then you gotta be ready to change it

-groan groan groan-

sure thing chicken wing

i mean, okay, i couldn't change Sira's name

or Daim

or Liadan

WHAT IF YOU DID OMG

CREYS

Prem maybe, Telyn maybe...

i AM going to change Ljubica's name

but this whole thing is constantly shifting, you know, it's evolving the final product is going to be very, very different

it may not even resemble this at all in the end - but hopefully it'll be better for it

I AM STILL EXCITED TO SEE IT

YAY~

but rest assured darling - by the end Sira and Daim will be in love and married

and most likely no one will die, unless it feels absolutely necessary

everything else though? well, we'll see