if Joey was here i'd just be like 'okay Joey! lung for the imaginary knife in Daim's chest while I try to stop you'

gjueireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhh

it's SO HARD

i tried to act it myself but i keep being like 'wait, what if this is confusing, does this make sense? where are they all?'

I KNOW THE FEELING

ANKARA

hahahahaha

shit, when the hell did it become 1?! D:

seriously, usually i freak out like 'oh noes, it's so late and it's only like noon' this time i'm not even worried much and it's like

wait, shit, 1 pm already!?!

i read over typos/bits from the bit with the Sindri on

this is all i've got because LOGISTICS

Sira felt his body shaking, a keening cr...

LEZ DO THIS

also it seems like rys = fuck, that was sort of accidental lol

ryshe tal = fucking hell

ryshe ka petakna = along the lines of you fucking bastard

but yes LOGISTICS, HELP

if we can both have it make sense and be the same thing in our head, then i'll be happy

it's like when you read fic and are like 'hang on, HOW are they positioned? 'except, you know, more stabbing

when did daim get on the ground?

well he was sort of sitting/slouched with Nasrin hovering (not literally) over him, cutting away

so the motion of Sira jumping on Nasrin would have pushed him down, but i'll try to make that more clear

oh okay

see, this is good! i need questions like this!

i don't think i even explained how they were sitting, just assumed...

yeah I don't think so I thought they were standing

my bad

though daim got his kneecap busted in, he couldn't stand after that

hold on just adding it in

how's this? right at the start

“Oh good, youre awake,” the Jael said, s...

does it fit? make sense?

i'll add a bit more about daim too, hold on

sorry i was gone ate lunch

that's okay! i'm waiting on dad to bring me back mine

here, i added this in too

Nasrin spun back around and, without any...

at one point Nas crouches in front of Sira, so clearly i knew in my head they were sitting down, lol

Choking and spluttering, Daim gasped as ...

does all of that help?

make it clearer?

yes it does

sweet~

clearly i was too subtle

which is good, and why i have you my BB~

good morning btw it's amusing that your lunch was really your breakfast

i'm trying to fight off panic about tonight's class by writing as much of this as i can

actually i think this bit makes more sense if he's sitting up...

“Stay away from me,” Daim said, panickin...

is the action clear enough? i don't know how to explain it better... :/

DON'T TOUCH MY BABIES