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Ria
says
12 years ago
Joey I love all of my babies, but I wonder if four characters is too many to be traipsing around everywhere :/ It's so hard to balance
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Ria
says
12 years ago
their dialogue and actions and all of that...
Ria
says
12 years ago
Oh the questions that come up when you approach the 50,000 word mark
Joey
12 years ago
iI'TS FINE
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Joey
12 years ago
I MEAN LIKE MY BABIES
Joey
12 years ago
ARE PERFECT
Joey
12 years ago
IF YOU TAKE EITHER LIADAN OR PREM AWAY IT JUST THROWS THE WHOLE THING OFF
Joey
12 years ago
THE WHOLE THING
Ria
says
12 years ago
hmmmm, yeah you're probably right
Ria
says
12 years ago
i'm getting ready to make changes though
Ria
says
12 years ago
be warned
Ria
says
12 years ago
i'm entering 'please let's not freak out' mode
Ria
says
12 years ago
but i need to get more character arcs and development going
Ria
says
12 years ago
get rid of plot holes
Ria
says
12 years ago
this convenient wavesong picking them up/prophecy/going here because someone said so business
Ria
says
12 years ago
that's all going
Ria
says
12 years ago
i need to make things harder, up the stakes
Ria
says
12 years ago
find their true motivation and make them all butt heads more
Ria
says
12 years ago
fight, argue, disagree, maybe even go apart then find their way back together, i dunno yet
Ria
says
12 years ago
point is i've got a sticky mess on my hands and if i keep going it's only going to get more tangled, so i need to untangle it
Ria
says
12 years ago
and put it back together better than before
Joey
12 years ago
ooooooh changes. FUN
Ria
says
12 years ago
... must... not.... freak... out...
Ria
says
12 years ago
... must... relax... and... change... novel...
Joey
12 years ago
HUGS
Ria
says
12 years ago
-snuggles-
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