does anyone want to do a final proof read of my personal statement?
sure 
thank you
if they don't take you based on that, i'm going to kick their arse because it's awesome. 
Annabee
thinks
it's amazing!
really?
*runs off to completely redo mine as it's shit in comparision* 
feck *comparison
oh. ok then. thanks can anyone see any mistakes?
can anyone see any mistakes?
nopeee
that seems pretty much flawless Heather
thank you
that's awesome.
heatherjayne: There is no way your personal statement will be the reason you don't get to do what you want to.