La Comtesse
3 months ago @Edit 3 months ago
I have to go back and do some rewriting later. I just contradicted something I wrote later in the novel.

On the other hand, it did help me make some stuff in that later period make more sense.
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La Comtesse
3 months ago
I mean, you and your college crush, who was also crushing on you, met up in the middle of a war zone. She left five minutes after graduation and didn't even leave a note. Why would you instantly reconnect emotionally and admit your feelings at that point? There's hurt to resolve.
La Comtesse
3 months ago
But if there was a relationship that, for reasons, had to hold to the bare minimums (darn religious kids and religious orders and asshole priests), and you knew about that reason? The hurt would be there, but probably easier to forgive.
La Comtesse
3 months ago
And when both of you were free, then you could express it all.

So their first kiss does NOT happen later, it happens in school, but they can't move forward at that point due to things that must be resolved first.
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La Comtesse
3 months ago
And then you, a warrior, see her on a battlefield, both of you in full-on War Goddess mode, and there is that thunderous spark again.

I have to rewrite their re-meeting because I want them both to go into a show-off mode, unconsciously doing it as, well, a fighting flirting.
La Comtesse
3 months ago
I love these two weird-ass girls. They both go through so much pain and suffering and when they find each other again, it's... not an immediate healing, especially with some stuff that happens later, but it's going to be very good when they finally get through it.
La Comtesse
3 months ago
They're going to earn that happy ending.
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