剛好湊了一些句子可以變成詩，所以我大概寫了幾行丟給ChatGPT，請老師幫我看看
When I was one-and-twenty,
My heart swelled with pride.
I knew nothing about eternity,
Because I would never be satisfied.
Tackling problems carelessly,
Finally being swallowed by landslides.
And when I was two-and-twenty,
Only emptiness is on my side.
老師說寫的不錯，但要寫長一點