我很少看長篇，所以看到是一章節完的文就直接點開 結果是系列作品（
現在才兩章
兩人還沒確認關係
還沒做（乾

我很喜歡裡面的用詞和描述

覺得路石文，有太多是..........比較負面的敘述（
自我傷害的文不少 我是指訴諸酒精藥品和自殺的內容（）以及重口味性愛

當然以重口味圈來看可能只是小兒科（
但我目前比較想看好好處理關係的文

第一篇 A Little Comfort

路平一直釋出善意想改善他與石內卜的關係，但石內卜不領情。不過不領情的主要原因，是因為憎惡天狼星的各種嘲弄。
石內卜雖然知道路平是偏向善意，但路平為天狼星的好友，他無法排除路平會跟天狼星講那些「把柄」

透過幫石內卜按摩以舒緩不適，路平最終成功緩解石內卜的偏頭痛，也讓石內卜能稍微好好休息一下

為了讓石內卜願意被按摩，路平透露天狼星會跑去他大腿上要求被按摩

石內卜在嚴重偏頭痛這樣脆弱的情況下，模糊間透露出一絲悲傷與嫉妒

“Better?” Remus murmured once some of the tension in Severus’s jaw and neck had eased.

“A little,” Severus admitted grudgingly. He frowned, “Don’t tell Black about this.”

“I won’t,” Remus agreed easily. “If it helps, Sirius would have put his head in my lap and demanded a massage hours ago.”

“That…” Severus pressed his lips together, clearly changing his mind about what he was going to say. “Of course Black would feel so entitled.”

Remus frowned. He didn’t want to start another argument, but he’d always admired Sirius’s open attitude towards physical affection. “Maybe we should all feel entitled to a little comfort when we’re poorly,” he said carefully.

“We… Black shouldn’t demand what he doesn’t deserve,” Severus replied. He opened his mouth again but shut it without adding anything else.

Staring down at Severus, Remus wondered if his headache was getting worse. Tension had returned to his jaw, and he’d sounded odd. Sad and… envious, Remus realized with surprise.

（續）

其實路平覺得石內卜會拒絕，甚至會憤怒（。
不過石內卜還是妥協膝枕（畢竟偏頭痛到直接吐ㄌ）

Remus felt oddly proud, like he’d coaxed a wild animal to come eat from his hand. Emboldened, he slid his fingers into Severus’s hair to rub at his scalp.

笑爛，路平很有成就感wwwwww彷彿成功把野生生物好哄來被餵食

石內卜發出舒服的呻吟，路平僵住，發現是無意識呻吟後就裝沒聽見
At the light touch, Severus’s lips parted slightly with a soft moan. Remus froze momentarily, but, judging by the sudden tension in Severus’s shoulders and the faint flush in his cheeks, the noise had been involuntary, so Remus forced himself to pretend he hadn’t noticed and continued carding his fingers through Severus’s hair.

齁齁齁心動了嗎
是心動齁
齁

路平在石內卜睡著時還是繼續按摩
不過因為當初下樓時人就已經很疲憊了，所以意識到石內卜睡著後，自己也跟著想休息了QQ

然後半夜時石內卜醒來（。）他的頭髮跟路平的手指纏在一起（

因為頭痛好點了，所以石內卜坐起來，然後以讓路平靠肩休息作為回禮

當然早上後，天狼星跑來找人
路平想起石內卜不想被天狼星看到自己狼狽狀態，所以幫忙隱瞞石內卜的存在

偷偷不鎖門，讓石內卜能悄悄離開

我們路平貼心小天使

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第二篇 A Little Risk

這可以說是我目前最喜歡的一個篇文wwwwww
因為路平真的好wwww機車wwwwww根本小惡魔 再玩火ㄚ
害可憐的石內卜在整場會議坐立難安

Although several weeks had passed since the last Order meeting he’d attended, he remembered everything that had happened as if it had happened yesterday.

Or, more precisely, he remembered everything that had happened after the meeting. The phantom feeling of Lupin’s fingers in his hair had haunted him, distracting him while he was teaching, plaguing him during conversations with the other professors, and, worst of all, tormenting him in the middle of the night.

好可憐wwwwwwwwww 明明過了好幾個禮拜，卻一直夢迴被按摩，甚至在他上課時、跟同事講話時都會分神

這是戀愛。認了吧石內卜

真的好可憐wwwwww自從那次之後就有段時間沒碰面，然後搞得想衝動找人又想乾脆從此不再見面

然後就惱羞：這都是路平的錯（。

Severus stopped dead, glaring at the ground as if it were personally to blame for his predicament. Lupin was sure to tell Black, and Black wouldn’t hesitate to mock him. Even if Lupin chose to let him down gently, Black would pick at him until he snapped, and being drawn into a duel in the middle of the meeting was sure to annoy Albus

真的很在意天狼星的嘲諷（閉目

明明使用消影術，但因為時間掐的太精準，結果所有人都入座了wwwwwww他是最後一位到場，而會議餐桌只剩路平旁邊有空位

都能感受到石內卜當下快兩眼一黑

不過其實石內卜平常就會掐好時間，這樣到場時看到天狼星和路平坐哪，他就選遠一點的位置坐 可惜這次只剩路平旁

Tonight though, there was only one chair left. It stood mockingly, temptingly, open on Lupin’s right. When he glanced at Lupin in surprise, unable to stop himself, there was a hint of a smile in Lupin’s eyes. On Lupin’s left, Black glowered at him.

真的不知道怎麼形容我好喜歡這個作者的用字 就是用的很簡單，但卻又很靈活深刻（？？？）
其實羅琳的用字也給我這種感受

光是把剩下的椅子用stood mockingly

“Severus,” Lupin murmured in greeting as he sat.

Severus didn’t deign to reply. He sat stiffly in the chair and turned his attention to Albus. Meetings never lasted that long, and he had done many worse things in his life than wait through an uncomfortable situation. He just had to be prepared for whatever Lupin had planned next.

石內卜的腦袋轉超多東西wwwwwww
接下來一整大段內心戲

\The meeting progressed tortuously slowly./

像這句話我也好愛 難以解釋多喜歡這個用詞

來看看行為對比

石內卜
Having his wand out would only earn him suspicious and disapproving glares, but Severus made sure his fingers lingered near the hidden pocket that concealed his wand in the sleeve of his robes. He’d let Lupin make the first move.

路平
Despite his vigilance, he could see no sign of an impending attack. Lupin appeared to be perfectly at ease and paying full attention to the meeting, without a single glance to spare for Severus. His hands were in clear view, resting on the table, and he was smiling faintly.

石內卜都準備好隨時拔魔杖了，我們的路平認真開會、噙著禮貌性微笑，雙手置於桌上

感謝好文推薦～
昨天點進去馬上秒速看完兩篇

好久沒有看到描寫關係這麽好的
而且還是路石～超喜歡

描述Severus理性層面的思考邏輯，還有Remus 最擅長邊裝可憐無辜的誘導式詢問都很到位。真心很覺得這描寫實在厲害（心理層面很不好寫確實是）

goiia: 啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
對不對QQQQQ這種描述文筆讚讚

沒錯！Severus的理性思考但有時候快達到鑽牛角尖了（ㄍ，以及Remus的誘導式詢問外加裝無辜（ㄍ描寫的很會捏 兩個人的特性和缺點都展現出來，再來就是慢慢去面對缺點、面對問題，最後達到走在一起

對對對心理層面的揣摩真的不容易

goiia: 如果涼有時間的話（？）可以試試同一個作者的中長篇～

我自己是不太看長篇文，而且這還是鰥夫單親爸爸路平（）但當初看一則留言講說「看完之後能理解前面的鋪層」我就跳下去ㄌ

劇情基本上圍繞在暫住石內卜家的路平育兒崩潰（乾）然後雙方慢慢面對心結，而且是時間線拉長的解開心結，側面描繪了被劫盜團當年針對他時，造成的影響有多大

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乾沒放網址

唉當初我以為會有床戲（）
結果只有接吻
雖然接吻戲有辣啦..............但...................但這完全沒有什麼adult content 啊？？？？
成人內容是什麼？？？？育兒嗎？？？？
就跟這個r18一樣莫名其妙（突然很氣

witch9409:

因為我本來就是因為路石這個CP入同人坑的，而我自己在JO坑的時候，也是因為喜愛的路石文作者的鼓勵，我才有勇氣跑場次出本。所以路石這個CP對我來說意義很重要，我也很喜歡描寫關係性細膩的作者，感謝推薦～

goiia: 天啊路石真的對涼意義非凡！！！還有同好的鼓勵而能踏出去！！ 感覺Homemade Wolfsbane有機會合你的胃口！我就不透露太多了
祝看文順利呀欸嘿嘿

witch9409:

我看完了！！！（有使用翻譯輔助所以才會比較快）

真的太喜歡作者的描述方式，還有兩人關係性的氛圍了！很久沒有出現看完之後，腦中還會忍不住一直回想情節的文章了（不管是中文/英文/還是日文），所以我也覺得好感動～

我一開始覺得光前面的情節描述互動氛圍就已經很香了，所以到接吻我覺得已經很不錯。

⋯⋯不過我後來一路看到結尾真的覺得沒有直接做下去有點可惜整個真想給你們錢快點做，也不會到不完整，但是都已經這樣這樣那樣那樣了（是怎樣？）接下去上個床以「成人的觀點」來說我覺得⋯⋯非常可以。

（但結果最成人的部份是養小孩還有找工作）
（怎麼可以 ）

我自己最喜歡的部份其中有一個是喝酒追悼的方式，那部分一整段的情節描述還有角色的互動氛圍都非常的合理，很喜歡他們這樣互動的方式，對應情感不迴避而又非常成熟，大加分～

後面確定感情的部份也寫得很好！真的就是非常的自然、非常的真實，而且會不自覺為他們感到開心呢！不僅是跨出去面對感情還有情慾的限制，還有著對於克服個人創傷所付出的決心和限制等等，很讚😎

goiia: 沒想到會看到心得！！！！！！！！！ 太高興能讓涼在看完故事後，還會回味餘韻

被蜻蜓點水吻到不滿足（舔嘴唇），好不容易被激吻了，結果對方又縮（氣死

不過我回鍋重看，然後又用路平的角度揣摩 還真的是從頭被拒絕到尾，抗拒成那樣，真的不能怪路平誤會ㄚ（

不過以角色邏輯來講，會有各種誤會很正常，畢竟前面還有陳年往事的積怨啊...............（躺）
是說我覺得以創作來講，能把這些「誤會」不寫得過於刻意也不簡單（掌聲鼓勵

我也很喜歡追悼的敬酒！！！！那幕能成熟，也是因為有前面的爭吵 學生時期的事情還是攤開來講了，即便當下沒辦法有共識，但至少攤開來了（

因為真的說到底，雙方也都有錯..........（糾成毛線球
但路平退了一步，並祈求原諒，石內卜也勉強退了一步，接受路平的道歉但對天狼星還是有怨恨（躺平（畢竟以角色經歷來講這並非一朝一夕能直接原諒

唉好喜歡

但還是難過沒床戲
最成人的內容就是育兒，還有對，找工作做 真是有夠成人（