I. Love. Your. Gold. I can hear and see him so clearly and he's so on pointe!

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I love how hard you lean into Mozenrath being a petty bitch V:

YonFellow: I feel like it'd be weird for him not to be without significant development

Oh, sure, but there's like. A vibe

It's not just "Let's make him difficult and unpleasant," you captured his specific flavor of antisocial

I think I've mentioned this before, but I love that you're not afraid to indulge in your character's flaws - as in you're not too proud to stop them from making a fool of themselves