At the point of almost done with this JJK fic where I am debating whether I keep just asking my sister and my wife for advice or I ask a friend to beta to get a fresh eye, but that would mean showing something that still needs work to fandom friends who actually write all the time and potentially spoiling the fun of reading the done thing
I have to get two characters to talk about their feelings when canonically all of their issues are caused by refusing to talk about their feelings
