peteb wants
16 years ago
to know if anyone would be interested in critiquing something he wrote about job interview tips.
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HCI Blogger says
16 years ago
send it along and i'll try when i have a free moment
marissa says
16 years ago
I'm happy to help out... I worked as a teaching assistant in law school, so I've got a lotta proofing/critiquing experience!
peteb says
16 years ago
Thanks. The blog it will be posted to isn't up yet, but this is a piece of content I'm writing for when it's ready.
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peteb says
16 years ago
There are probably some typos, etc.
marissa says
16 years ago
nice job, pete--easy to read, humorous, practical. couple notes: saavy should be savvy. The period after "Russian heathens" should go...
peteb says
16 years ago
oops, outside the parens.
peteb says
16 years ago
thanks for those catches. just finished writing it, so i haven't proofed it at all yet
marissa says
16 years ago
...outside the closing paren.
marissa says
16 years ago
I think the first time you refer to the "techno-savvy midgets" should be "tech-savvy midgets" to match the phrasing in last paragraph.
marissa says
16 years ago
I love the metaphor you've got going there, though. You could easily make a series out of that, if you wanted. Nice advice, nice writing!
peteb says
16 years ago
thanks bracke!
peteb says
16 years ago
have to head out for a few, will be back in a bit though. thanks again! really, really appreciate it.
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